My name is Siti Sarah binti Lokman. I live in Johor Bahru, Johor. I was born at 13 February 1991 and now i am 18 years old. My zodiac is Aquarius. I have six siblings and I was the fourth. My hobbies are singing and shopping. I very love red and white colour because the red is symbol of courage and the white is symbol for peaceful. My ambitions is to be a teacher and i think more advance if i be alecture because I love to teach. Now I am studying at Unversity Darul Iman Malaysia, Terengganu. I take Diploma in International Trade course. My future when I studying, I hope that my future will be succeed and bright. I hope I can be more brave to go through my life and this adventure world.
Saturday, January 30, 2010
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Hye..sarah!!em..i like what you want to be!but word "lecture" must have "r" at the end of the word.So,it will be "lecturer".
I think you used a good word in your paragraph and equipped imformation about yourself.
But have some mistake at your paragraph.For example,there should be a spacing of 'a' and 'lecturer'.Other than that,you should be careful because there is some word misspeling such as "Unversity" and "lecture".Besides that you must be careful with you past and present tense.But overall i think your paragraph is good.
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