When I watch about Nick Vujicic life I feel so sad but I am very proud of him because he is a very resolute and courageous. I think we must tankful for God because we had provide with perfect limbs. He is very active to do any activity in a day. He never waste the time. Every time, he will do any beneficial activity. He also is a very strongly person. Even he life without limbs but he still smile and always feel happy and I feeling very pleased about him, he can swimming, surfing and many defficult activity he can do.Other than that he never mutter with his life. Sometimes I think about me. I had provide with perfect limbs, but sometimes never feel thankful. I feel very proud about him because his resolate not strongly as me. I am not as strong as him. Sometimes I always feel very give up about my life when I have a big problem even I know the problem can settle, but Nick Vujicic are never. I hope that I can be as strong as him.
Sunday, February 7, 2010
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4 comments:
your essay nice,,
but check your writting at line 2,4,and 5,,
you also must check your used word in sentence like "beneficial" just use the simple word benefit,,,,,
nice description but you should be alert with your sentence because there is some word missing in your sentence.I do not understand by what you say about "but Nick Vujicic are never" maybe you should use sentence which is more understandable.
good job!!!You essay have a good content.Ilike you essay.But have a wrong spelling such as "Thankfull" and "difficult".I think you should use the addition word such as other than that,the other else and in addition.But over all you essay is nice...,,,
have some grammar mistake and wrong spelling like "defficult".Anyway,it a good essay.
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